I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hi Irangi Im Calais from paroa school and liked your thing about the great wave but you you need to add a little bit more detail and make it more interesting at the moment it is a little bit boring and if you added more it would be cool Calais
Hi Irangi, my names Bella and I'm from Paroa School. I think your wave is really cool, and I also did one just like that. I think to improve you could add a bigger caption and explain why you did it. Do you like art? From Bella.
Hello Irangi, I'm Lucy from Paroa School. This looks really cool! I remember doing something like that for the summer learning journey. To be BTB (Better Than Before) you could add a description for why you did this. Lucy
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Hi Irangi Im Calais from paroa school and liked your thing about the great wave but you you need to add a little bit more detail and make it more interesting at the moment it is a little bit boring and if you added more it would be cool
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Hi Irangi, my names Bella and I'm from Paroa School. I think your wave is really cool, and I also did one just like that. I think to improve you could add a bigger caption and explain why you did it. Do you like art?
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This is the best drawing I ever seen
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ReplyDeletethat's the first picture when you search it up
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ReplyDeleteNice good drawing irangi
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ReplyDeleteHello Irangi, I'm Lucy from Paroa School.
ReplyDeleteThis looks really cool! I remember doing something like that for the summer learning journey. To be BTB (Better Than Before) you could add a description for why you did this.
Lucy